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Past a small gravel road outside of Tickhill stood a small forest. The trees were bare with icicles hanging from their branches. The snow was so tightly packed, it seemed like it was made of white concrete. Further into these woods, you might have found some birds or nests perched in the higher up branches. Continue on and you may have found a small stream that was paved over with a thick sheet of ice. All of this seems pleasant, correct?

Now, a few feet from that stream, packed tightly behind trees, you'd find a rope. This rope was tied to a rather high branch. Whenever the wind blew, you'd figure the rope would sway a decent amount? No. There was something - no... someone - weighing it down. A particularly young lad. Dangling by the neck, this young man's face was plastered with the grip of death. His arms discolored and bruised and his eyes shut, he simply dangled a few feet from the ground. His scarf just barely around his neck and his hat thrown to the ground below him.

He was only 17. He slowly lost his mind. He slowly died inside. Everyday. His nightmares finally caught him.
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Just a little writing I'm starting. I hope you guys like it. Let me know if you guys think there should be a filter on this. I don't know if there should be but let me know?? There is more to come soon! :)

- MusicToTheMoon
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~Ichigo7997 Sep 6, 2012  Hobbyist
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Very nicely done. This also has a format very similar to some pastas I've read.
And as for the filter thing, you shouldn't need one. It's not gory or gross so it's fine without one, they're not really a required thing anyway.
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